Inclusive language
Forge copy reaches account holders of every age, ability, background, and financial situation, through hundreds of institutions. The goal isn't to avoid offense; it's to make sure nobody has to translate before they can act.
Principles
- Write to the person, not the category. Describe what someone is doing or needs, not who you assume they are.
- Don't assume the reader's situation. Household, income, family, employer, device, and comfort with money vary more than any persona suggests.
- Choose plain over clever. Idioms, culture references, and jokes don't survive translation, screen readers, or a stressful moment.
- Say the specific thing. Vague softening ("some users may experience issues") hides who's affected and what to do.
People
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| you, your account, account holders | users, customers (in product UI), members (unless the institution is a credit union) |
| people, everyone, anyone | guys, folks, ladies and gentlemen |
| primary account holder, joint owner | husband, wife, head of household |
| parent or guardian | mom, dad |
| the person who shares this account | spouse, partner (unless they've told us) |
Use members for credit unions and customers for banks only where the institution's own vocabulary is configured. Where copy is shared across both, use you or account holders.
Ability
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| Select, choose, open | Click, tap, see, view (as the only verb) |
| Enter your code | Type your code |
| A screen reader reads this label | Blind users hear this label |
| Turn on larger text | For visually impaired users |
Write the action, not the sense or the body part that performs it. "Select" works with a mouse, a finger, a keyboard, and a switch. "Click here" fails all but one.
Don't name a condition to explain a feature. Larger text is for anyone who wants larger text.
Money and circumstance
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| Your balance is below zero | You're overdrawn again |
| Payment didn't go through | Payment failed / declined |
| Add money to cover this | Insufficient funds |
| Past due · Set up a payment plan | Delinquent, defaulted |
| Your account is locked. Unlock it from Cards. | Your account has been frozen for your protection |
Money copy reaches people on their worst day. State what happened and what to do next, without characterizing the person. "Insufficient funds" is a bank's phrase; "add money to cover this" is a person's.
Locked and frozen aren't synonyms. A lock is a security step the person can undo; a freeze is a legal or compliance hold. When it's a freeze, use the required wording and say what to do next. Some notices are required by regulation to use specific terms; see Errors and validation.
Age and experience
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| New to online banking? Start here | For seniors / for beginners |
| If you've done this before, skip ahead | Advanced users can... |
| Set a reminder | For those who forget |
Segment by task, never by age.
Words that carry history
Replace these everywhere, including code comments and internal docs, so they don't leak into product copy.
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| allowlist / blocklist | whitelist / blacklist |
| primary / replica | master / slave |
| placeholder, sample | dummy |
| quick check | sanity check |
| stalled, no-op | crippled, lame |
| default | native (for a setting) |
Mental health and violence
The other category that leaks from engineering and casual speech into product copy.
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| unexpected, unusual, a large swing | crazy, insane, nuts |
| stop, cancel | kill, abort, terminate (in UI) |
| thorough, careful | OCD, anal |
| limit, restriction, gap | blackout (for a period), blind spot |
Idioms and culture
| Do | Don't |
|---|---|
| Almost done | Home stretch |
| Something went wrong | Houston, we have a problem |
| Try again in a few minutes | Hang tight |
| This can't be undone | Point of no return |
If a phrase needs the reader to know a sport, a movie, or an American idiom, cut it.
Pronouns
Use you and your for the reader, and we for whoever is speaking: the institution in account-holder products, Jack Henry in the back office. For a third person whose pronouns aren't known (a payee, a joint owner, a contact) use they, or rewrite to use their name or role.